Currently Writing Screenplay For "Bullet Frame"

Hi. MBJ here. I am currently making the screenplay. Here it is the leaked version of the screenplay so far.

“Bullet Frame”
Screenplay by
McKay Olson

Olson Studios and MBJ Productions
Present
A McKay Olson Picture
McKay Olson (Hank Hamil)
Ryan Olson (Mark Jackson)
“Bullet Frame”
Summer Olson (Mayor Lee)
Maddie Olson (Aleka Hominga)
And Landon George (Fred Jones)
And introducing
Sydney and Abby Olson (Twin Culprit)
Music By: Don Davis
Visual Effects By: Videocopilot
Edited By: McKay Olson
Director of Photography: McKay Olson
Executive Producers: McKay and Ryan Olson
Story By: McKay Olson
Produced By: McKay and Ryan Olson
Directed By: McKay Olson
Opening Scene (Part 1):
Hank Hamil standing outside in Russia. Out of the distance Aleka Hominga appears and shakes Hamil’s hand.
Hominga: Ready to get to business?
Hamil: Yes, I am.
(Hominga pulls out paper and points and explains some business, then fades out)
In Phillips, Maine, there’s a town hall meeting with the mayor Lee, Mark Jackson, and the whole town.
Lee: …So the financial business in food is surprisingly low, so we should spend less on the water tower and more on crops to grow.
(Town objects)
Lee (angrily): Okay, so what are you proposing, since all your ideas are so much better than mine.
Town Man 1: Well, I think we should…
(Gunshot)
(Town man 1 goes flying with a bullet going through him. Town panics.)
(More gunshots, many people dying)
(People taking cover, few surviving)
(Audio fades; silent gunshots)
(Criminal disappearing)
(Back in Russia)
Hominga: So if we put it this way…
(Phone ringing)
Hamil: Excuse me a second.
(Answers phone)
Hamil: Hello?
Jackson (panicky): There have been multiple gunshots and 3/4ths of our people have been injured or have been murdered!
Hamil: Wait, wait, wait… Why would a single criminal attack a little town like Phillips?
Jackson: I don’t know, man. But it happened. We need you to come back immediately.
Hamil: Okay, I’ll be right there.
(Gets off plane and then walks into CIA building)
Hamil: Okay. Why the heck did this happen.
Jackson: Maybe people found out we were hiding here.
Hamil: Yeah, but why would the criminal attack innocent people?
Jackson: Listen, man, I really don’t know. That’s what we are gonna find out.
(End of part 1)
10 Minutes

(Part 2)
(Fire Hall Meeting with Mayor Lee, Mark Jackson, and Hank Hamil)
Lee: So, Mark, you’re going to find out exactly why and how this happened.
Hamil: Pardon me interrupting, but we actually do know how it happened.
A criminal charged and killed 76 people and severely injured 64 citizens who are currently in the hospital.
Jackson: Hey, smart aleck. Shut it, ok?
(Mayor Lee sobbing)
Lee (through tears): I shouldn’t have let this criminal kill my people. This is all my fault.
Hamil: No, it’s not. It’s my fault for not being here to stop it.
(Next scene in church)
Priest: For next ward business we plan to sustain Mayor Lee to Primary Teacher.
Those in favor will you please manifest it.
(People raise hands)
Priest: Also those who oppose may also manifest it.
(No one raises hands)
Priest: Good.
(Outside church)
Jackson (to Hamil): Hank, we need you to come in at 7:00 tonight.
Hamil: Why?
Jackson: Just get dressed, eat dinner, and do whatever until 7:00, okay?
Hamil: Sure.
(Gunshot; everyone panics)
(Hamil takes cover in front of a car)
(More gunshots; few hitting people)
(Criminal takes out shotgun)
(Hamil runs to his car and takes a gun out)
(Big shootout)
(Criminal escapes)